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Tom Merrill's avatar

An agreeable poem. Thx for sharing this. "Cast among the ever blind..." Seeing quite clearly where it all leads can make it hard to join in the revelries. Her special sight was an especial curse. When the trappings don't hide the essence, one is fully disconnected from the general outlook and experience. The most discerning can only lament the spectacle--and pointlessly warn. The occasional "Schopenhauerian poet" could certainly feel helpless to help--& condemned to see what no one else does. Too bad fact is everywhere, and not just an apparition. I'd guess Cassandra was a stand-in for Schiller. Do they call him a "pessimist" too? The blind will always label with loaded terms. They've certainly stocked Ai with a full supply of them. Again, most agreeable. And thx again for sharing.

John Martin's avatar

Verse V line 3: Wouldn't 'Fires leap up towards the Heavens' work better? I must say your scansion really has improved! Now you need to work on surprising aptness. I mean at the level of the individual word.

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