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John Martin's avatar

It's always a good sign when a poem demands to be read aloud 'to get the beauty of it hot'. And yet it's also full of clever little touches which don't distract from the whole but add to it. Double entendres that turn out to be quite different in meaning when you follow through to the next line. Including one that is sexually ambivalent. And the skillful use of internal rhyme, including one three syllable rhyme which was positively breathtaking.

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

It's amazing just how relevant and timeless and touching this poem is right now. These lines alone, regarding a great love, a great passion, that seems heightened by an awareness of the sad fate that awaits it, speak volumes about the inevitable ongoing consequences of warfare - especially for women:

Hold him, lie,

tell many pleasant tales of lips and thighs;

enthrall him with your sweetness, till the pall

and ash lie cold upon him.

A real tour-de force! Well done, Michael.

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