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Ku-Chan's avatar

🙏🏻 that was the most beautiful part of my day xx

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Craig Holtzclaw's avatar

I have always wanted to put this to music. On the recitation, It might need more smiling confidence, optimism.

Craig Holtzclaw.

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David Gosselin's avatar

Thanks Craig. The good thing about being able to share these things is I can get feedback. There’s definitely room for improvement, even speaking a bit less dramatically at times and letting the melancholy fully blossom, and let the smile of joy of that then follow naturally.

You compose music? I’d be interested to hear more.

Sincerely,

David

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Craig Holtzclaw's avatar

No composition from me.

I have noticed for years that memorizing and reciting Shakespeare’s Sonnets has a deep effect on my pre conscious ability to choose images and words when I am organizing others.

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agnusde2017's avatar

When Jubal struck the corded shell,

He knew the angel Israfel...

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Michael R. Burch's avatar

Another excellent reading. Bravo!

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