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John Martin's avatar

Your scansion is getting a lot better.

I always prefer to indent the shorter lines, so as to bring out the structure of the poem. This is because art is about the transmutation of content into form. And it is this which gives art its healing effect, both for the artist and the audience. That form of course should emerge naturally from the content, and so help reconcile one to it.

This also means that irregular lines are easily seen for what they are.

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patrick butler's avatar

Keep up the great work Brother

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